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Original: 8/27/2006 12:03 AM
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Sunday, August 27, 2006

railroad

 in a dream i walked the tracks
with someone i had never met.
(because you can't be alone on a journey
like that.)
the trains went by and the smoke
billowed black.

we'd camp that night;
we carried packs.
just a jacket on my shoulder
and a bag at my back.
(because you travel light
on a journey like that.)

everyone else
took the bus.

those who travel best--travel light.
even through the night
when the sky
billows black.
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I think this is one of my favorite things you've ever written.  It just has a perfect cadence, and a flow to it that makes it sit just right in the brain (if that made any sense at all)...

Awesome.

Posted 9/3/2006 12:17 PM by Draith - reply

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i have a proposition for you...

would you be interested, maybe possibly, in critiquing each other's writing? i've been writing a lot more lately, and i would really appreciate feedback. i probably can't offer very sophisticated criticism, but i love reading your writing so i'll offer what i can (which will probably be mostly praise and not very helpful).

interested?

Posted 9/14/2006 10:54 PM by nina_de_dios - reply


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